If heaven

 

 

If heaven was a place we could go to everyday
I'd pack my bags and travel to it every other day
If heaven was a season it would be a summer afternoon 
As the sun caresses the sky till late before the rising moon
If heaven was a song it would be with a sweet melody
That resinates in your ears with a soft tranquility 
If heaven was a country it would be a  paradise for your eyes
A tropical wilderness with rainbow skies
If heaven was an ice cream it would be full of richness and creams
Drizzled with your favourite toppings 
made only in your dreams
If heaven was a town where our loved ones were to dwell
I'd tell them everyday I missed them but I'm sure they could tell!!
If heaven was a dance it would be a slow one with a sweetheart 
Holding each other so tight and close before the music starts 
If heaven was a dream it would be one you'd always remember 
Like a family gathering on a snowy December 
If heaven was a memory it would be like the ones in my childhood
Etched with fondness an with love as it should
If heaven was a book it would be your favourite of all time
Reading it over and over like a nursery rhyme 
If heaven was an era it would be the Wild Wild West 
Where you'd play poker in a saloon dressed in your best
If heaven was a place we could visit through the clouds in the sky 
There'd never be a time we'd have to say goodbye
 
To all those lost 
R.I.P



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Comments (28)

  1. cjb321

    This is just wonderful! smile

    December 14, 2015
    1. wonderwall79

      Thank you as always for reading my little ditties

      December 14, 2015
  2. shadow-storm

    Beautiful and touching with a tang of bittersweet- like sweet & sour, but in a good blend to leave a hopefull taste, maybe… Nice one

    December 14, 2015
    1. wonderwall79

      Haha well put as usual thank you as always for reading and commenting just a little ditty to pass the time

      December 14, 2015
  3. starsinhereyes

    You have a beautiful soul and I love this very much I was thinking of a good friend of mine tonight that I took care of he started out as a client and I just loved him and his family. I miss him every day . He was a cranky little Italian man to most but we had a special connection

    December 14, 2015
    1. wonderwall79

      Mmmm thank you my friend your comments are very kind
      I appreciate that
      Thank you

      December 14, 2015
      1. starsinhereyes

        well my comments are very kind because you are a kind soul with a big heart and I love what you came up with in this post. Ever since I lost my brother I always wonder what he is doing up there? This post made me smile

        December 14, 2015
        1. wonderwall79

          Hahah well your most welcome and thank you very very much

          December 14, 2015
          1. starsinhereyes

            no I thank you very very much

            December 14, 2015
            1. wonderwall79

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  4. aivz

    I like the way you wrote this. The way you make your words paint what the mind and heart should see and feel. Its very touching, very true…and I am moved on the way you wrote each lines…

    December 14, 2015
    1. wonderwall79

      thank you aivz for your very kind words and comments I really appreciate that

      December 14, 2015
  5. Walkaboutman

    Beautiful man. It realy touched me.

    December 14, 2015
    1. wonderwall79

      Thanks my friend just a wee ditty
      I appreciate your comments

      December 14, 2015
  6. SEC

    beautiful revery
    “If heaven was a dance it would be a slow one with a sweetheart
    Holding each other so tight and close before the music starts”
    If heaven was a damce it would be an intricate one
    Each dancer circling and weaving to the glory of the beloved one

    December 14, 2015
    1. wonderwall79

      thank you as always now see that paints a better picture probably a better verse too
      Where were you when I was thinking of lines to rhyme ahhhh to have a better vocabulary
      Ive often wondered what if I started a line and gave it to the community what it would become there’s an idea haha

      December 14, 2015
      1. SEC

        Bless you for that thought! Someone just landed this weeks scribbles challenge in my lap and you have sparked the idea!

        December 14, 2015
        1. wonderwall79

          Hahaha well ain’t that just a hoot lol
          Well some things in life are just meant to be I hope it works haha

          December 14, 2015
          1. SEC

            See for yourself, I just posted the challenge.

            December 14, 2015
            1. wonderwall79

              Ok I’ll gallop over there now

              December 14, 2015
            2. SEC

              you peeked LoL

              December 14, 2015
            3. wonderwall79

              Haha perhaps I may have

              December 14, 2015
  7. morningafter7

    This is just gorgeous, ww! Really, really nice. Those last two lines – omg – if only it were! Very nicely done.

    December 14, 2015
    1. wonderwall79

      Yeah thank you MA7
      yeah I wish that too very much every day
      Thank you always for your comments

      December 14, 2015
  8. thrivehive09

    niice

    December 19, 2015
    1. wonderwall79

      Well I appreciate that your most welcome just a little ditty as are most of the other ones I post, but never the less your comments I welcome and I appreciate very much so

      December 19, 2015
  9. thrivehive09

    December 19, 2015